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Katie wrote a new post on the site Español 102 9 years ago
Me gusta los gatos mucho. porque son muy graciosos y pequeñoes. Pero, a veces, los gatos pueden grow muy grande por qué no les gusta hacer ejercicios. No tengo ningunos gatos en mi casa, pero mis amigos tienen a […]
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Sam Kuhn wrote a new post on the site The Nature of Nature 2017 9 years ago
Although Edward Abbey may not always depict the use of nature in ways that others would like, his honesty about the areas that he deems ‘not as natural as before’ intrigued me. In the beginning of Desert […]
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Keira wrote a new post on the site Encounters and Identities in Latin America 9 years ago
My Wikipedia article is on the Common Alternative Revolutionary Force, the disarmed political party that is FARC. The notes I received on my proposed edits were to add more sections and background perhaps, as well […]
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Matthew Sobota commented on the post, Details and Dillard, on the site The Nature of Nature 2017 9 years ago
I never thought of Dillard’s writing style in this way! This is spot on with how I feel about writing papers sometimes. I find myself structuring content and approach around how many words or pages I need to meet, […]
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Will wrote a new post on the site Encounters and Identities in Latin America 9 years ago
I will take Fish’s advice to include a history about Cobra Mansa’s history that gives insight on his influencers. Although the article includes the names of those who have influenced Mestre Cobra, the article is […]
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Fish wrote a new post on the site Encounters and Identities in Latin America 9 years ago
The advice I received was too elaborate more on the information I was adding and use sources that were relevant to the information I wished too add. As well as adding a section on the origin of Macumba, and […]
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Joseph wrote a new post on the site Encounters and Identities in Latin America 9 years ago
My peer reviewer mentioned a few things about my sources which I think are incredibly important. Dr. Holt noted that two of my sources are not very scholarly though they have interesting information. My peer […]
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Alex Moore commented on the post, Annie's eye for details, on the site The Nature of Nature 2017 9 years ago
I like your piece about Dillard’s book. I agree that her use of language is masterful, and it certainly sucks the reader into the book. I think it is good you have cited a specific example from the novel in order […]
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Tanaka wrote a new post on the site Encounters and Identities in Latin America 9 years ago
Learning points
The feedback I received on my wikipedia talk page was extremely helpful. My evaluators made recommendations that I make my intended changes and plans clear from the onset. Initially, I had gone […]
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Maggie wrote a new post on the site Encounters and Identities in Latin America 9 years ago
I’d thank to thank my peer reviewer for their feedback. I only had one peer review and many of their comments were about my writing style. I will improve my grammar and sentence phrasing to make it easy to read. A […]
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autumn commented on the post, To Walk Alone, on the site The Nature of Nature 2017 9 years ago
Hey Emma,
To answer your question: so far I’m not sure if Abbey’s writing style will affect my own. I’d have to say that I haven’t read enough yet to really know. The opening moments in “Desert Solitaire” are […] -
Emma commented on the post, To Walk Alone, on the site The Nature of Nature 2017 9 years ago
Your writing style is beautiful! I especially loved the way you describe waking up, it gave me an image in my head if waking up cold on a grey morning. I was wondering how Abbey’s writing effects your own. Do you […]
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Katherine commented on the post, I've Seen Abbey's Stars (I Do Not Think He Would Like That Statement), on the site The Nature of Nature 2017 9 years ago
I agree with your comments about industrial tourism. I realize that it would be best to experience the national parks on bikes or just by walking through them, but I also see how that can be unreasonable. When I […]
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Jovi wrote a new post on the site Encounters and Identities in Latin America 9 years ago
Although I only received one peer review edit, the opinion was quite helpful. Joseph stated that my plans were very descriptive. He also agreed with me that there were a few examples of plagiarism already on the […]

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camryn wrote a new post on the site Encounters and Identities in Latin America 9 years ago
First, I want to thank my peer reviewer! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my ideas on improving the article and giving me feedback for it. The person who reviewed my ideas of improvement ag […]
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Maya wrote a new post on the site Encounters and Identities in Latin America 9 years ago
The additions that I will make to my Wikipedia article are central around the success of the brand, Havaianas. As a result, both of my peer reviewers suggested that it may be difficult to remain neutral when […]
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Katie wrote a new post on the site Español 102 9 years ago
A mi me encanta muchos animales pero yo tengo tres son que mi favorito. Elefantes son más importante que los tres para mi. Elefantes son un símbolo de buena suerte cuando el trompa está arriba. Tambien, el […]
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Liz Stanis commented on the post, A Pond on my Clothing, on the site The Nature of Nature 2017 9 years ago
I really enjoyed reading this. The way it is written is very poetic. I like the comparisons being made between your life and Thoreau’s. Where you could have criticized or complemented Thoreau I think you took an […]
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Alexandra Kangas commented on the post, On Being Lost, on the site The Nature of Nature 2017 9 years ago
I completely agree that Thoreau was hard to read. His language is oftentimes dense and I found myself disagreeing with many of his ideas and most especially his attitude. Not many people can take the luxury to […]
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Alexandra Kangas wrote a new post on the site The Nature of Nature 2017 9 years ago
Portions of Annie Dillard’s writing in Pilgrim at Tinker Creek convinced me that nature is more than just beautiful landscapes unaffected by human invasion and fascinating undomesticated animals; it is also the u […]
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