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Hi! I loved your topic and theme! It is definitely one of the topics I’m really passionate about as someone who is into self-development and self-love. I can’t wait to see your final project. Your organization […]

In this storyboard, I believe that it is reaching full point on most of the criteria. The organization of your thoughts are clear, there is evidence of strong planning while all of the elements are fitting […]

This looks like a very good building block for creating your final project. However, this seems to be more a script than a story board. Maybe try to find a way to add information such as your target audience, […]

This is a good story board, but you could include statement of accessibility.

Those boxes are for my cohost and I to put our ideas in closer to recording time so we have a strong idea of key points we want to hit.

I like how your simple storyboard is summarizing the whole project making everything that you are going clear and organized, and how you were able to mention the audience giving a clear view about your project […]

Hello Gabrielle! I love your topic and how you plan to connect it on a global scale. You have a great layout and statement of design. I like how you have individual goals for each segment too. I would suggest […]

This storyboard is simple and very easy to “navigate”; it’s also pretty unique because I noticed that you will add a hotline for people who need to talk to a professional about such issues. That’s very thoughtful!

Firstly, I really like how this storyboard looks! It’s got great organization and is a really nice visual to look at. I really like that your doing a stance on toxic relationships, as I feel they are becoming more […]

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I like the idea, but it seems like you opt and pasted the same text into two different boxes. This may confuse you in the future.

I think you have a great idea because Many incoming college students don’t know how social media can leave an impact on their life. In regards to your story board i liked they way you made it easy to understand […]

You did a great job with organizing your story board, making it easy to read and understand what your project is going to be about. You also made sure to add different ways of accessibility and inclusion for all […]

This is a solid story board. I like the fact that it’s simple and easy to see the bigger picture. You have included the theme, goal structure and accessibility which is great.

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I like the topic, you have a nice foundations with strong ideas. I would suggest putting down some of the ideas on how media benefits the younger athletes so when it comes time to record your ideas are already […]

I think you did a really good job on making this story board. It is very organized with your arrows, making it easy to read. You included what you will be taking about along with adding aspects of accessibility […]

I really like your idea, Frankie. You did really well with organizing it and making sure you hit the mark on accessibility and inclusion, which I really liked. I can see how this storyboard serves as a great […]

Hey Derrick, I think your topic is great, however it looks like you didn’t fill in the other two boxes on some of the ways it benefits and hurts students or athletes.