Parker

I’m glad to hear that you found so much success in using do not disturb. I like your note about how you often have a tendency to continue using your phone for long periods of time after just simply checking it for […]

We all know that sleep is very important, so the fact that you were able to discover that this practice leads to better sleep could be very beneficial. It’s great to hear that you not only felt like you slept […]

This looks like a very good building block for creating your final project. However, this seems to be more a script than a story board. Maybe try to find a way to add information such as your target audience, […]

Overall, I think your story board looks really good. I like how organized it is, it seems like you have a really good idea of what your final project will look like and you know where you are going to include all […]

I think you have a really good outline here. I like how you used the arrows to show how different elements of your project will build off each other. I also like how you made sure to include the requirements of […]

As an athlete myself, your project is very interesting. I like how you detailed the field sharing inequalities, but also mentioned that all fields are well maintained. I also like how you shared some of the […]

Overall, I really like your project. I like the images you selected and I think they do a good job of conveying your messages. I also like the theme of your project because it is obviously very connected to […]

First, I think the name of your podcast was very creative. I also liked how you addressed both the pros and cons of social media. Social media is definitely a double edged sword in that regard and you did a good […]

I like your enthusiasm throughout the whole podcast, but it was especially great during the intro, which was good hook for the podcast. I also really liked your added sounds effects throughout as they were a good […]

I like the bird’s-eye view effect of the shoefie, it adds a unique twist that most shoefies don’t have. I also like the date in the corner of the Wooster photo because it matches the color of your jersey and also […]

The photo of the pencil is very cool. I like how the camera was focused on the pencil, but you can still make out the drawing in the background, which is giving the illusion that the paper is breaking beneath your pencil.